i b resEarching (lol)

After long and hard thought (jk i dont b thinking) I decided to focus my research paper on my second essay. My second essay focuses on the thematic comparisons between the poems "Valentine" and "Ever After" and the power and uncertainty that is in relationships. One of my main reasons for opting with writing about this essay instead of the first is due to the fact that my argument is better executed.

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In this research paper I will focus on gathering information that helps back up my claim that couples have a hold over each other and can somehow make each other loose sense of reality. Through the help of Lee College's Databases I will search to the ends of the earth and do whatever it takes to find the necessary info. I kind of have some sources in mind and am thinking of incorporating some scientific facts that will talk about the endorphins let out by the brain when in love.I will tie this up to show that these endorphins might be why those in love think irrationally and loose a part of their individual self. In order to develop this essay into a trustworthy paper I will also stray away from unreliable sources such as our favorite one :Wikipedia. Not only will unreliable sources discredit my paper, but it will lack the information that is needed for a research paper to classify as such.

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Furthermore, I will also go back and revise and edit my essay as a whole and look for structural errors in my writing. One of my main issues no matter what I am writing is my comma usage, for some reason I can't comprehend when and when not they are appropriate to use. Thus, paying a visit to the writing center will help ensure these errors are fixed.

Hopefully, my argument is once again clear and the added research will help back up my claims on the toll relationships have on others and help explain they why aspect. So far, I feel okay about this paper and wish to accomplish a purposeful paper.